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作者: rocksiu1998 时间: 2011-11-18 21:02:07 标题: 我英文的魔方的演讲稿

最近学校有个演讲比赛，英文的，我老师一直强调选你喜欢的东西来写。。。所以我就写了魔方。。。演讲还挺成功的

这是稿子。。。讲了5分钟，全班最长。。。。。好尴尬

Rubik’s cube

Today,I’m going to talk about Rubik’s cube, I think all of you know what is a Rubik’s cube, but I’ll just say it just incase you don’t.Rubik’s cube is a cube, with a different color on each face, each face have 9 box, and when you twist the cube around, the cube will be scramble,with different color on each face. I think you know how hard it is, but it’s actually not that hard.
First, I’ll talk about the history of Rubik’s cube, The Rubik’s cube was invented in 1974, by a hungarian guy named Erno Rubik, he is a professor on how to build stuff, and also a guy that makes scupture. He did not invented it to became a toy, he invented to show his student about structures and 3d stuff, but later, he found out that it’s really hard to get it fix after twisting it,and he think this will be a good toy and so he lets a company to make it and sell it, and people got crazy on it. It was most popular on the 80s. between 1980 to 1982, almost 2millon cubes were sold, and till now more than 300million cubes were sold.
Next, I’ll talk about different kinds of cube. Cube is not just about 3x3x3,3x3x3means the most popular one,it mean it is 3block x 3block x 3block. There are 4x4x4, 5x5x5,6x6x6…….with the highest of 11x11x11, but one thing interesting is that even though there are 11x11x11, there are no 10x10x10,8x8x8, because cube that are even number x even number, it is harder to make it, it is harder to design a structure of a even number cube, that why the odd number cubes always come out earlier than the even number ones. Cubes don’t have to be a shape of a cube, you see the normal cube have 6side,but some, it have 12side, with each face a shape of a pentagon. There are also cubes that looks like a soccer, I think you know aboout normal soccer, it is a pentagon in the middle,and there are 5 hexagon sticking to each side of the pentagon, and that cube really look’s like a soccer, except it’s colorful. Ofcorse, this is only a very very small part of all different kind of cubes.
There are one thing that I think the cube is cool about,a normal 3x3have a lot and a lot of form, what is a form?well,for a fixed cube, it is one form,if you turn it on one side,that’s another form, and if turn again on a other side, and it’s another form, if you just randomly scramble a cube, it will also be one form.And this number is huge, I don’t know how to say it, I’m going to say it in number, it is
43，252，003，274，489，856，000!
Lastly I’m going to talk about why I think it is fun to play rubik’s cube, first, it uses your brain,it is actually not that hard to fix a cube, go on the internet and there will be a lot of videos telling you how to solve a rubik’s cube, second, it is small and you can take it out and play at any time. Lastly you are just going to love it when you can fix it fast, you will love the feeling everytime you break your record, you are just going to love everything about it!so, get a cube and start playing!

作者: mrmnm 时间: 2011-11-18 21:08:14

寫得很好啊~~ 很不錯~~
就是不明白第一段怎么說魔方很硬, 但其實不硬呢??

作者: rocksiu1998 时间: 2011-11-18 21:13:30

原帖由 mrmnm 于 2011-11-18 21:08 发表
寫得很好啊~~ 很不錯~~
就是不明白第一段怎么說魔方很硬, 但其實不硬呢??

hard是多义词，hard可以是硬的意思，也能说是难的意思，比如说this rock is very hard就是说这块石头很硬，如果说this game is very hard 就是这个游戏很难的意思

I think you know how hard it is, but it’s actually not that hard.
那这句话的意思就是“我想你知道它有多难，但其实没那么难”其实我这句话本身有点奇怪。。。。。。。

[ 本帖最后由 rocksiu1998 于 2011-11-18 21:15 编辑 ]

作者: s1092124482s 时间: 2011-11-18 21:15:51

hard是难啊

作者: 狂奔的篮球 时间: 2011-11-18 21:18:26

不错不错这么长脱稿？

作者: 焚寂 时间: 2011-11-18 21:24:24

收了，山寨一下，楼主不介意吧。。。

作者: rocksiu1998 时间: 2011-11-18 21:24:46

原帖由 狂奔的篮球 于 2011-11-18 21:18 发表
不错不错这么长脱稿？

我的老师说，你要是喜欢这个话题，你就可以任何时候就在那边讲，他强烈说不要我们背，这份稿和我要说的东西一样，但是说的时候不用背，因为我知道这些“知识”可以直接说，讲的时候就是拿着小卡片，上面写着要说的东西比如
介绍
历史，1974发明，1980,3million
种类，x阶，结构，五魔，足球

然后说的时候可以看一看小卡，提醒接着要说啥。。。。。反正那么长的文章我是不可能背下来的。。。。。。

作者: 冷帝 时间: 2011-11-18 21:25:57

不错
最后一段有俩Lastly~~似乎不妥

作者: rocksiu1998 时间: 2011-11-18 21:26:06

原帖由 q408196528 于 2011-11-18 21:24 发表
收了，山寨一下，楼主不介意吧。。。

不介意。。不要全抄就是了。。参考一下不介意

回楼上
眼睛真尖。。。自己都没发觉，我常写着作文就出现了很多and,then,because,but,有时双but，双because。。。。

[ 本帖最后由 rocksiu1998 于 2011-11-18 21:27 编辑 ]

作者: 潜水艇 时间: 2011-11-18 21:35:15

六级没过，不敢妄加评判。。。。。。

作者: Crazy Tien 时间: 2011-11-18 21:50:02

一个匈牙利的家伙：厄尔诺鲁比克

作者: mrmnm 时间: 2011-11-18 22:03:29 标题: 回复 3# 的帖子

好吧, 其實你想說hard to solve吧~~ 你这樣寫是解作很硬, 要準確些可以用difficultt啊

作者: 蓝疯子 时间: 2011-11-18 22:04:01

问问LZ
and also a guy that makes scupture
是什么意思啊
在第二段介绍鲁比克教授附近
我英语不好啊

作者: 8078234 时间: 2011-11-18 22:04:49

- -我想二楼的大仙英语差了点

作者: 蓝疯子 时间: 2011-11-18 22:05:48

好像有高手MOD了8*8*8了吧？

作者: mrmnm 时间: 2011-11-18 22:59:23 标题: 回复 13# 的帖子

可以解作他是個build stuff(建東西)的教授和做雕塑的家伙
其實可用建築學architecture來代替build stuff. guy在英語解作家伙, 这里用得有點怪, 和前面的professor語境有點沖突

作者: mrmnm 时间: 2011-11-18 23:01:57 标题: 回复 14# 的帖子

話說我英語確實是缺點, 不然我就去混TP了

作者: rocksiu1998 时间: 2011-11-18 23:09:41 标题: 回12楼

我看不出用hard和difficult的区别在于那，不觉得difficult会更准确，一样
回15楼
我说的是量产

别跟我说圣手。。。
回16楼
恩恩，其实我这个是在演讲前一天才写的。。。。。。。。没那么仔细。。要是用architecture反而可能有人听不明白

至于guy嘛。。是有点怪，觉得问题不大

作者: redcarrot 时间: 2011-11-18 23:15:22

LZ多大了？
文章不错哈~就是小错多了点……

作者: mrmnm 时间: 2011-11-18 23:28:47

Rubik’s cube is a cube, with a different color on each face, each face have 9 box, and when you twist the cube around, the cube will be scramble,with different color on each face. I think you know how hard it is, but it’s actually not that hard.

藍字整句都說魔方的物理結構, 从未提及还原, 按前文后理推斷你的hard只能解作"硬", 如果用difficult, 需然还是錯, 但肯定不会有岐意.

"you may thought that it is hard to solve, but actually, it isn't."

[ 本帖最后由 mrmnm 于 2011-11-19 03:09 编辑 ]

作者: mrmnm 时间: 2011-11-18 23:29:11 标题: 回复 19# 的帖子

同意!!!

作者: AnsonL 时间: 2011-11-19 02:48:16

嘿嘿不错挺简单的。

作者: 飞鼠。 时间: 2011-11-19 08:39:41

楼主英文好。看不懂的路过。。。

作者: rocksiu1998 时间: 2011-11-19 08:47:54

原帖由 mrmnm 于 2011-11-18 23:28 发表
藍字整句都說魔方的物理結構, 从未提及还原, 按前文后理推斷你的hard只能解作"硬", 如果用difficult, 需然还是錯, 但肯定不会有岐意.

"you may thought that it is hard to solve, but actually, it isn't."

哦哦！！这个有道理。。你强！

回19楼
13岁

作者: 野猪哇 时间: 2011-11-19 08:55:38

膜拜LS各位，都是牛人啊...

作者: LAL 时间: 2011-11-19 09:46:48

虽然语法错误挺多的（可能是我GMAT作文写多了，总带着批判的眼光看文章，原谅我。。。），不过以LZ如果是13岁的话，这个水平确实了得，比我们好多大学同学作文水平还要高点，去考四级作文肯定毫无压力。

作者: mrmnm 时间: 2011-11-19 11:01:25

話說我13岁時作文250字己經是覺得很難很難的了....

作者: 打败Erik 时间: 2011-11-19 13:02:03

嘿嘿蛮有意思。。。正好复习下单词了

作者: 肥嘟嘟左卫门 时间: 2011-11-19 13:21:39

哇~
不错啊~
想知道那个变化数量的怎么读啊~
好长的~

作者: rocksiu1998 时间: 2011-11-19 15:01:02 标题: 回26楼

语法确实是我的弱项。。。。。常想，英语搞那么多语法什么的干嘛。。。。其实我觉得学英语的最好的办法，不是找最好的老师，最好的课材，而是到一个英语的环境，我学校以英语为主，来这个学校前英语也很差。

回27楼
可能和我用电脑写有关，我写中文作文，手写写不了多少，电脑写却可以写很多。这个论坛也把我的拼音弄好了（以前在香港，不会拼音。）

回29楼
那个。。我也不会，我就是一个一个读，four,zero,one,two.....那样

作者: LAL 时间: 2011-11-20 01:03:57

原帖由 rocksiu1998 于 2011-11-19 15:01 发表
语法确实是我的弱项。。。。。常想，英语搞那么多语法什么的干嘛。。。。其实我觉得学英语的最好的办法，不是找最好的老师，最好的课材，而是到一个英语的环境，我学校以英语为主，来这个学校前英语也很差。

回2 ...

正解！在国外上学就算你不开口说，天天听进步也神速。。

作者: AnsonL 时间: 2011-11-20 16:28:11

那个数字叫quitillion==不过你说出来也没有人知道的

作者: xiaoshudian 时间: 2011-11-21 18:54:12

学习了。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

作者: falling_rain 时间: 2011-11-22 08:00:27

Rubik’s cube
Today, I’m going to talk about Rubik’s cube. I think all of you know what a Rubik’s cube is, but I’ll explain it just in case you don’t know. Rubik’s cube is a cube, with different colors on each su**ce, each su**ce has 9 boxes. When you twist the cube around, it will be messed up with different colors on each side. I think you know how hard to solve it, but it’s actually not that hard.
First of all, I’ll talk about the history of Rubik’s cube. The Rubik’s cube was invented in 1974, by a Hungarian guy named Erno Rubik. He was a professor on how to build stuff, and also a guy that makes scupture. He did not invent it to become a toy. He invented to show his students about structures and 3d stuff. But later, he found out that it’s really hard to get it fixed after twisting it. He thought this would be a good toy and so he authorized a company to make it and sell it, then people got crazy on it later on. It was the most popular puzzle in the 80s. In between 1980 to 1982, almost 2 million cubes were sold, and it reached to more than 300 million cubes until now.
Secondly, I’ll introduce you some different cubes. Cube is not just about 3x3x3, 3x3x3 means the most popular one. It means that it has 3 blocks x 3 blocks x 3 blocks. There are 4x4x4, 5x5x5, 6x6x6… as well with the highest of 11x11x11, however one thing is interesting that even though there are 11x11x11, no 10x10x10, 8x8x8 are produced, because cubes with even number x even number are harder to make, it is harder to design a structure of a even number cube. That’s why the odd number cubes always come out earlier than the even number ones. Cubes don’t have to be a shape of a square, you see the normal cubes have 6 sides, but some have 12 sides, with each su**ce a shape of a pentagon. There are also cubes that look like a soccer, I think you know about normal soccer, it is a pentagon in the middle, and 5 hexagons sticking to each side of the pentagon, and that cube looks really like a soccer, except it’s colorful. Of course, this is only a very very small part of all different kinds of cubes.
One thing that I think the cube is cool that, a normal 3x3 has a lot and a lot of forms. What is a form? Well, for a fixed cube, it is one form, if you turn one side, that’s another form, and if turn again on another side, it becomes another form. When you just randomly scramble a cube, it will also be one form that differs to others. And this number of the permutation is huge, I don’t know how to describe, I’m going to say it in number, it is
43，252，003，274，489，856，000!
Lastly I’m going to talk about why I think it is fun to play a Rubik’s cube. First, it uses your brain, it is actually not that hard to fix a cube, go surfing on the internet and there will be a lot of videos which telling you how to solve a Rubik’s cube; Second, it is small and you can take it out and play at any time. Last but not the least, you are just going to love it when you can fix it fast, you will love the feeling that each time you break your record, you are just going to love everything about it! So, get a cube and start playing!

给文章做了些小改动, 没有试图去改整体结构, 主要是语法方面的, 还是按照楼主的水平来的. 希望能对楼主有帮助. 楼主对鲁比克职业的描述, 我也不知道怎样改才好, 就放下了.

作者: 冰雪 时间: 2011-11-22 08:05:50

lz英语不错啊,......

作者: 恰米 时间: 2011-11-23 17:55:26

写的不错，借鉴了！

作者: rubik-fan 时间: 2011-11-23 18:26:04

with a different color （1）on each face, each face have 9 box（es？）, and when you twist the cube around, the cube will be scramble（d）,with different color（与1处不一致） on each face. I think you know how hard（这个就不说了） it is,

作者: rocksiu1998 时间: 2011-11-23 18:39:22

原帖由 rubik-fan 于 2011-11-23 18:26 发表
with a different color （1）on each face, each face have 9 box（es？）, and when you twist the cube around, the cube will be scramble（d）,with differenjt coljor（与1处不一致） on each face. I think you ...

要是把第二个different改成with different colors on each face会不会好点？

作者: andyzhangdayu 时间: 2011-11-23 19:00:46

原帖由 rocksiu1998 于 2011-11-23 18:39 发表
要是把第二个different改成with different colors on each face会不会好点？

with colors messed up on each face.

作者: falling_rain 时间: 2011-11-24 13:35:06

花一个多小时帮你改的文章, 连句谢谢都没有...

作者: 佐耳 时间: 2011-11-24 13:49:44

看不懂那，表示压力大。。。。

作者: rocksiu1998 时间: 2011-11-24 17:08:20

原帖由 falling_rain 于 2011-11-24 13:35 发表
花一个多小时帮你改的文章, 连句谢谢都没有...

谢谢，好对不起。。不好意思

也请大家不要再花时间在这个上面了，我演讲稿在我发之前已经讲了，谢谢大家

作者: cad 时间: 2013-10-25 15:50:39

好文章，顶一下

作者: 孤独惜爱 时间: 2013-10-25 21:31:13

多么好的帖子啊，楼主，借来用用

作者: cad 时间: 2013-11-27 22:23:55

不错不错，顶一下

作者: 高原狼 时间: 2013-11-27 22:54:03

No wrong ,no wrong ,thank you for it.

作者: wg191680 时间: 2013-12-20 23:30:36

这个资料不错啊。

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